This is writing activity helps the student to sequence their writing. The comic strip is used as a motivation to write his/story… This is Isobel's interpretation of the pictures
One quiet afternoon in the city it was a nice warm day. The people were shopping in the clothing section for the town party.
I saw an old man with big framed glasses and he had a walking stick. I noticed he was almost going to walk on the road without looking.
The old man stepped onto the road he didn't see the zooming coming near him!
Suddenly the car came to a quick halt . The old man growled at the driver.
We are tomorrow finishing off our writing, so stay tuned for our final caption…...
We are tomorrow finishing off our writing, so stay tuned for our final caption…...
Isobel, your story is well thought out and written in a logical manner. Especially like the description of the city.
ReplyDeleteNext Step: I have included an exclamation mark rather than a full stop to add excitement for the reader. Exclamation marks are a feature that you should be looking to use in your writing.
Awesome Work.